"Being an author is like being in charge of your own personal insane asylum." Graycie Harmon
Thursday, April 23, 2009
Interview with Jerry Borrowman by Michele Ashman Bell
It is an honor for me to interview Brother Borrowman for my blog. I have been a huge fan of his since his first book, Three Against Hitler, was published. As a former missionary to Germany I learned first hand about the devastation suffered during the war and I spoke with countless survivors, mainly widows, who lost their husbands and sons, in battle. I developed a deep compassion and intense desire to learn about those survivors and the heroes who risked their lives to help others. Brother Borrowman's book, A Distant Prayer, is extremely powerful, telling the story of an American soldier, shot down behind enemy lines and suriviving as a prisoner of war. My life and heart have been touched by these amazing stories of amazing people.
On the back of the book is a wonderful synposis of the story.
Artie Call can't get a break. Orphaned during the Depression, he steals food to survive. When mischief lands him in juvenile court, he's offered a home by fellow ward member David Boone, but then suffers under Boone's unkind and unyielding treatment. And after Artie helps the victim of a robbery gone bad, he's abandoned by Boone and is almost sentenced to juvenile hall.
Then his luck and life suddenly change.
Mary Wilkerson, the feisty widow who was robbed, sees potential in Artie and takes him into her custody. Ray McCandless, the wise yet firm chauffeur, teaches Artie about cars, life, and the connections between the two. Under their care, Artie develops the desire and the ability to leave his past behind and grasp the hope in his future, which shines like Mary's luxurious Duesenberg. But when cornered by old enemies, will he defend his honor with his life?
Jerry Borrowman masterfully combines emotion, morality, suspense, and humor in this tender coming-of-age story. Readers will struggle and rejoice with Artie as he discovers the value of integrity, the sweetness of family ties, and the reality of the American dream. And they will never forget the triumph that unfolds when a good boy with bad problems is given one last chance.
There are also some wonderful endorsements of this book:
"Jerry's attention to detail will bring to life the excitement of seat-of-your-pants racing down the dusty roads of Idaho. You will smile, you will laugh, and you will be reminded of the Artie Calls in your own life. So hold on!! It's a wonderful ride." W. Kevin Marsh, automotive restoration specialist.
"Jerry Borrowman brings readers a touch of nostalgia for a time long past, when cars were grand, movies were only shown at theaters, and life moved at a slower pace. One Last Chance delivers a subtle reminder that personal honor; faith in God, and the love of family are the real antidotes to the worst social ills." Jennie Hansen, author of High Country
Here's a brief bio of Brother Borrowman: "Jerry Borrowman was born and raised in Southeastern Idaho. He has written numerous articles in both Church and financial publications including the Church News and Ensign. His 'Til the Boys Come Home series has been a favorite in the LDS market. He and his wife, Marcella, live in Sandy, Utah."
Here's my interview with Brother Borrowman:
M.B.: When did you first know you wanted to be an author?
AUTHOR: My first hint was when I submitted an article to the Church News featuring a person that I admired. When the article came out exactly as I'd written it I was thrilled to think that something I felt was important could be shared and perhaps appreciated by others. For the next ten years I wrote articles occasionally, including a number in the Ensign. Then the chance came to help Rudi Wobbe tell his remarkable story of growing up in Nazi Germany where he two friends from his LDS ward decided to start a resistance effort against the government. Obviously the drama and sorrow in his story was worthy of a full book, which we wrote over the next three years, and Three Against Hitler went on to be a bestseller--still available fourteen years later. The impact of his story is ongoing -- we even won the National Award from the Freedoms Foundation at Valley Forge for contributing to the cause of freedom through our writing. President Dwight D. Eisenhower was the first recipient of this award.
M.B.: What was the pathway like for you to get your first book published?
AUTHOR: It was miserable. After finishing the manuscript for Three Against Hitler I felt it would be of interest to a national audience and submitted the story to more than 25 publishers. We were rejected by all of them. I then submitted it to Deseret Book and Bookcraft, who also turned it down. At that point I was despondent and let the manuscript sit for over a year. Rudi called me one day, having spoken with Elie Wiesel (internationally recognized Jewish author and survivor of the Holocaust) who encouraged him to keep at it until his story was published. Rudi said, "Jerry, what are we going to do with the manuscript?" I was exasperated, having been the one to receive all the rejection notices. "Maybe nothing, Rudi -- I'm told this type of story just isn't selling right now." In his strong German accent he replied, "That's just not good enough." So I told him that I would have the manuscript reviewed by some outside readers to see if it needed to be fixed somehow. Darin Rodriguez, an outstanding LDS author, and my wife Marcella then read it. Both commented that once they got past the history lesson at the beginning of the first chapter the story was really compelling. After cutting 60% of the first chapter, the next publisher we submitted it to accepted it.
I should say that this was a new area for Covenant Communications. Many years later I learned that in the final review meeting the vote actually went against publishing Three Against Hitler because it was so out of character with the type of works they were accustomed to publishing. It was at that point that Robby Nichols, vice president responsible for publicity and sales spoke up and said, "This is an important story and it should be told -- and we should tell it." The book went on to outsell all but a handful of their titles. In a very real sense I owe my writing career to Robby for standing up for us that day.
M.B.: Were you ever discouraged along the way? If so, how did you deal with it?
AUTHOR: I think the previous story speaks to early disappointments. But it wasn't over. Five years after Three Against Hitler, I was introduced to Joseph Banks who had served in the U.S. Army Air Forces in World War II. Joe's B-17 bomber was shot down behind German lines in the last year of the war, and Joe suffered terrible deprivation as a prisoner-of-war. In fact his life was preserved in miraculous circumstances a number of times. When I heard his story I felt a burning in my heart that this had to be shared with the world. But after writing it we were turned down by both Deseret Book and Covenant. I felt that was a terrible mistake on their part--somehow I knew that if the story made it into print it would inspire people around the world. So I pushed--first to do an abbreviated serialization of the story on Deseret Book's website for virtually no compensation. When that started to be successful I pressed to have it come out on at least audio, since the production costs are lower than a book. Deseret Book demurred. So I sought permission to send it back to Covenant. After some extensive discussions, DB gave me permission (which I will always appreciate). When Covenant read it the second time they decided to bring it out as a book. "A Distant Prayer -- Miracles of the 49th Combat Mission" was an instant success, coming out just weeks after 9/11. Hundreds of thousands of LDS and non-LDS readers have been inspired by Joe's remarkable story, and he has been invited to travel all over the country to speak to youth groups and firesides. It was traumatic for Joe to open up these old memories, but by doing so he actually inspired many veterans to finally talk to their own children about their experiences in the war.
This is being a long answer to your question, but I think it's important. At one point in this long process my wife asked me in kindness, "Why do you keep pressing this? Why not accept "no" and save yourself this aggravation?" I responded that I just knew this story needed to be shared, almost as if it was an obligation on my part to see it through. I'm glad it turned out so well.
After these successes you'd think it would get easier. But my first draft of 'Til the Boys Come Home, the first book in my four-book World War I and World War II fictional series was also rejected by one of the major publishers before finally being picked up by Covenant. The series has also done well very well and has been a great experience for me to write.
So, I guess the moral to the story is that if you believe in yourself, and if a reader's panel judges that your work is high quality, you just need to keep trying. Not all the manuscripts I've written have been published, but my new book, One Last Chance, will be number nine. I was pleased today when a reader said he thinks it's actually my best book yet. I am so grateful that people have chosen to buy and read my books. I love my readers.
M.B.: What is your writing schedule like?
AUTHOR: I tend to write in spurts. I have a full-time career that I enjoy, so writing is a hobby. Typically I'll develop an outline for the story and then mull it over in my mind for a month or so, jotting down thoughts as they come. Then I'll do the initial research needed for an historical novel. And then I'll write furiously until I've completed a few chapters. I usually do this while traveling to make use of the otherwise idle time in a hotel. Then it's back to the research and the cycle starts over.
M.B.: Where did your idea come from for this book?
AUTHOR: Believe it or not, I often start with technology (I love the technology of the late 19th and early 20th century). In this case I was rather emotionally exhausted after writing more than 2,200 pages about war and the magnificent men and women who served on our behalf. So I decided to see if I could come up with a story that featured some of the great classic cars of the Great Depression years.
At first I thought it would be a lighthearted tale of a boy growing up in Boise who has the chance to drive a Duesenberg (the ultimate American automobile). But as the characters began to reveal themselves it became a much deeper story about how people deal with crisis in their lives, and how a troubled young man's future could be changed by adults who took up his cause. In the end it has become one of my very favorite stories to write, filled with a lot of emotion.
M.B.: What was the research like for this book?
AUTHOR: I loved researching this book. I like setting my stories in the west (with a trip to New York City always included). So, I had to learn everything I could about Boise, Idaho where I lived for a short time while in college and near where my son Jeffrey and his wife Eden and daughter Maya (my one and only grandchild) now live. It's the perfect place for a story like this since Boise has always been a small city with a bigger city feel.
Then I had to learn about the era--movies, radio, trains, and the great classic automobiles -- Cadillacs, Lincolns, Chrysler Imperials, and especially the true masters of the time, Cords and Duesenbergs. Since not everyone knows what a Duesenberg is I should point out that was the classic car driven by movie stars, gangsters, and even Ab Jenkins whose Mormon Meteor (the fastest automobile in the world on the Bonneville Salt Flats) was a Duesenberg. At a cost of between $400,000 to $800,000 in today's dollars, it was truly one of the finest cars ever built.
Which brings me to research. Because of this book I had a private tour of the Auburn-Cord-Duesenberg museum at the original factory in Auburn, Indiana hosted by Jon Bill, the chief archivist. Then, in a thrilling turn of events, I met Kevin Marsh who had recently completed a full restoration of a classic Duesenberg owned by Richard Lossee as part of his private collection. Richard gave me the thrill of a lifetime when he allowed me to take a ride with Kevin in his magnificent 1929 Duesenberg convertible (Engine # J-249 and Chassis #2492).The ability to inspect one of these great cars first hand was invaluable to my writing. Both Jon Bill from Auburn and Kevin Marsh were kind enough to do a technical edit of my book to make sure I got the history right.
I suppose that's one of the things I love most about writing historical biography and fiction--so many people are willing to help and to share the unique knowledge they have about a topic or period of time. I love trying to bring history to life for my readers.
M.B.: What words of advice do you have for other writers who desire to have their manuscripts become books in print?
AUTHOR: First, concentrate on the story. While the history is important, it's the story that will make people laugh, cry, become angry, and ultimately feel inspired. Second, form a good reader's panel of people who will be honest with you about your writing. I always have at least six or seven people read each manuscript before I submit it. My wife Marcella is sometimes my toughest editor, but she's also the one who loves me enough to tell me when something isn't working and needs to be changed. Third, stay at it. I've been rejected dozens and dozens of times. Yet I keep trying.
M.B.: What is your process of brainstorming a story? Do you just sit down and write, waiting to see what happens next? Or do you outline first?
AUTHOR: I'm an outline person. When the story starts to come together in my mind I write out a list of what I believe the chapter headings will be and then start to write notes on each chapter. But I can only do that so long before I have to just WRITE SOMETHING. You can always go back and change things, but only if you first get something tangible down on paper.
M.B.: Do you ever experience a snag in a story, a form of writer's block? If so, how do you deal with it?
AUTHOR: Perhaps the hardest thing for me is giving names to my characters. Somehow I have to be able to picture the person in my mind, match up his name to the type of personality that begins to emerge, and to see how he or she interacts with other characters. I'm sometimes surprised that characters who I initially think will play an important role in a book begin to fade while others take on a major status. For those who have read 'Til the Boys Come Home, I thought that Danny O'Brian's mother would play a substantial role. But as time passed she simply faded away, which was sad for Danny since she didn't really stand up for him, save for one occasion.
As to writer's block--of course. Writing is hard work. Sometimes when I get writers block I'll move to a different chapter and work on that for awhile while I mull the problem that's got me stuck. A new solution almost always presents itself if I'll give it some time. On other occasions I just have to write even though I don't want to. It's easier to watch TV, but not nearly as satisfying in the end.
M.B.: Do you need absolute quiet to write? Do you listen to music when you are writing?
AUTHOR: I either need quiet or instrumental music. I can't write with a television in the background or songs with words. Right now I'm listening to an instrumental version of "Come Thou Fount of Every Blessing" by David Tolk.
M.B.: What kinds of inspiration do you use during your story creation periods?
AUTHOR: Places, people, and things. All my writing is in an historical setting, so I try to find human accomplishments in that time and place that inspire me -- the Hoover Dam, an aircraft carrier and the men who serve on it, a motor torpedo boat and the crews who risked their lives every night to keep supplies flowing into England in World War II. Actually, finding inspiration is quite easy because there are so many inspiring people.
M.B.: Who has made the greatest difference for you as a writer?
AUTHOR: Having readers tell me how much one of my stories affect them. For example, just this week I received an email from a man who served in Vietnam. His father had served in World War II, and two of his sons are serving in Iraq. He wrote to tell me how much he enjoyed my 'Til the Boys Came Home Series and the way it honored the men who serve in the military. It's humbling to have veterans say such things and makes all the frustration worthwhile. The most moving experience I've ever had was when I received an anonymous letter after A Distant Prayer Came Out. A man wrote that earlier in the week he had been contemplating taking his own life. Then, when he read Joe Bank's story of being all alone as a prisoner-of-war in Germany, and how his life was saved by miraculous intervention in the most desperate of circumstances, he wrote, "I guess that if God can remember Joe Banks in the middle of war torn Germany, perhaps he can remember me." I wept because I know that He can. In a very real way He did.
M.B.: Do you use a critique group during the writing process? Why or why not?
AUTHOR: It's so hard to take criticism. My poor wife shudders when it's time for her to read a manuscript because she knows I'll get pouty when she tells me what's what. But I desperately need her and all the others on my readers panel to make sure I stay focused and interesting. I can't thank them enough.
M.B.: Anything about yourself that you would like readers to know about?
AUTHOR: I believe the best thing about my leading characters is that they are generally tolerant people. One of my heroes was a Church of England minister. In One Last Chance Artie's life is changed by a caring bishop, a loyal Teacher's Quorum president, and by a non-church-attending mentor who loved him for who he was. We all need each other and can find our lives enriched by people from all walks of life. I hope that sentiment is something I'll be remembered for.
M.B.: Any final words you would like to share
AUTHOR: Just how grateful I am to my publisher, Covenant Communications for doing all the work of bringing seven of my books to the public (and Deseret Book for "Beyond the Call of Duty"). I also appreciate the terrific people who work in the bookstores who have such cheerful attitudes and who point people towards the stories that they think will most appeal to that reader. Most of all I'm grateful for my readers. As a writer yourself, you know just how much you come to appreciate that unseen audience out there who chooses to read what you have to write. It gives added meaning to my life.
M.B.: Where can our readers go to find your books and order them?
AUTHOR: People can go to www.jerryborrowman.com to read sample chapters, view a synopsis of each book, and find links to various booksellers who sell online. Of course I think it's great when people find their way to one of the many bookstores that carry our books, including Seagull Book and Tape, Deseret Book, LDS Independent Booksellers, and occasionally WalMart, Barnes and Noble and other national chains.
Brother Borrowman has generously offered to give away one of his to blog readers.
To enter this contest, please follow the simple rules outlined below:
1) Add a link to this blog post on your blog, with a note about the contest.
2) Post a comment on here so I can visit your blog and see your entry.
That's it! The winner will be chosen at random by Brother Borrowman to receive the book! Winner will be announced next Thursday!
ALSO, check back Monday for the Baby onesie drawing!
My greatest claim to fame is my family. I am married to my prince charming and have four awesome children. This year I experienced the joy of becoming a grandmother to my sweet baby girl Halle. I love to travel and I love to write books.